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[evan]
Posts: 5628 - Karma: 117
I don't really know what to call this, but basically I want you all to tear it apart, give me hate, love advice, anything that will make me better.

I'll say that I am aware of the shaky tripod shots, I'll be investing in a new head soon which will correct that issue, and I didn't do any color correction or grading.

Here we go:

The Fall from Evan Aiudi on Vimeo.

Filmed using a Nikon D3100 W/ Kit lens, edited in Adobe Premiere CS5.

Filmed and edited by Evan Aiudi.

Nov 24 2011 7:51PM
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JWD*
Posts: 466 - Karma: 225
the editing was good... the footage was a little bit shaky though. Cant wait till u start makin ski edits
Nov 24 2011 8:17PM
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blatt
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It felt like a bunch of random shots slapped together. Another thing I didn't like was the typography of the credits; I also wasn't a fan of opening up with credits.

Colors were ok, a little bit more time and they would've been amazing. b/c they definitely were in the ballpark IMO.
Nov 24 2011 9:55PM
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[evan]
Posts: 5628 - Karma: 117
It really was a bunch of random shots, one day I was bored and wanted to test my recording settings to make sure everything was waorking and looked good and I ended up shooting a shitload of random things and put this together.

Do you mean font for the credits part?

And I didn't do anything to the colors, I dropped contrast in-camera, but thats it.
Nov 24 2011 10:29PM
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