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Critique my edit

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b*man
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threw this up real quick, gonna make v.2 in a bit with more slow mo
Nov 20 2011 10:14AM
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Mag
Posts: 8155 - Karma: 14,809
literally loved it apart from the annoying ass blur vignette, if your gonna use one just make it black and less apparent.
Nov 20 2011 10:28AM
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.spaghetticat.
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it was sick
but here is some critisim

1. get a better song

2. no blur vinegret (or what ever its called)

but other wize its DOPE

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Nov 20 2011 11:08AM
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cultrara
Posts: 5147 - Karma: 46,849
if you get a new song make sure its around the same speed, i really like the pace of the edit. And fo sho cut that blur thing
Nov 20 2011 11:34AM
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B1kessk1s
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nice but try shooting with a tripod. a lot of your shots are shaky
Nov 20 2011 11:49AM
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b*man
Posts: 169 - Karma: 19
thanks for the feedback!
Nov 21 2011 7:25PM
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kootenayklaus
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Not EVERY shot has to be done with stabilization, sometimes handheld shooting adds to the effect.
Nov 21 2011 7:31PM
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eheath
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Cut the bad tv, cut the vignette, keep the song and quick cuts, loved that.
Nov 21 2011 7:42PM
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Gmart
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inb4 new song but other then that pretty good
Nov 22 2011 10:48AM
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juicedrummer11
Posts: 1960 - Karma: 1,331
cut the vignette and better song maybe, pretty cool tho
Nov 22 2011 3:59PM
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will_powder
Posts: 3194 - Karma: 5,445
Knife show much?
Nov 22 2011 6:37PM
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juicedrummer11
Posts: 1960 - Karma: 1,331
sorta got this feel as well actually
Nov 23 2011 2:47AM
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Raz.
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especially because of the exact same font they use...
Nov 23 2011 11:26AM
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Belzebub
Posts: 451 - Karma: 812

I think the edit was SiCK!, but a few things 1.You should get rid of that blur thing, its really annoying. 2. It felt almost like a teaser or a trailer because some of the shots were cutted almost before you saw the landing, and it was a bit short(maybe it was supposed to be?). 3.You had many different angles, but i missed some followcam lines. A little critisism, but keep up the good work

Nov 23 2011 12:11PM
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us1rk
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SICK!! 10/10
but cut the blur
Nov 23 2011 3:00PM
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