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.spaghetticat.
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Nov 18 2011 10:35PM
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west-coast
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Nov 18 2011 10:41PM
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.spaghetticat.
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dont talk
ur edits are shiitt
and the amount of hate you get on newschoolers is sososo funny
Nov 18 2011 10:51PM
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west-coast
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lol okay
Nov 18 2011 10:53PM
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paco5555
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ur skiing isn't bad i would just say work on some more angles...keeping the camera in one place gets the watcher bored but your spins...holy shit! just keep working on video man +K
Nov 18 2011 10:58PM
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RW_Visuals
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Ok to start off there needs to be a variety of shot types. All your rail shots were all the same, different shot types help make the video more interesting. It gets a little boring just watching the same shots over and over again. Zooming in and out for the jump shakes the camera a lot, I would suggest getting closer to the jump or just don't zoom in or out.

The color looks very good especially of the rail shots! Nice spins also, very impressive. Keep working hard on the edits, you will learn more and more, the more you edit videos.
Nov 18 2011 11:02PM
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.spaghetticat.
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thanks!
Nov 18 2011 11:02PM
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RW_Visuals
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Yeah no prob. Look forward to seeing more edits of yours.
Nov 18 2011 11:11PM
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.spaghetticat.
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+k to all
Nov 19 2011 8:19AM
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dubtwo
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if i were you i probably would have mixed the rail shots in with the jump shots so you didn't keep seeing the same angle over and over, but that is just me
Nov 19 2011 9:13AM
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cwillygood
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i would agree, the same angle got old fast, skiing was ok, the jumps were actually sick (that handdrag was amazing), id only put the best shots in, like on that box there were a few that shouldnt have bee in there

but overall nice job
Nov 19 2011 10:41AM
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.spaghetticat.
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thanks I wasnt planning to make an edit b/c it was a competition but i got some shots so i wanted to make an edit
Nov 19 2011 11:33AM
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NJurkiewicz
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First everyone below me was right you need more angles also that intro was poor and choppy by being put in the video. You want your into to be more seamlessly in the video you don't really want it to disrupt the flow of your video. Also your logo or whatever for SCM was in a picture which I would recommend is get rid of the picture and then overlay the text on some video shots you already have. That is just my .02 cents
Nov 19 2011 11:45AM
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[evan]
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What the fuck.

Dude at first I was watching the rails and was like, ghey, then it cut to jumps and I flipped shit. The kid can barely k-fed but can cork 7?! Thats pretty crazy if you ask me.
Nov 19 2011 11:57AM
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.spaghetticat.
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yeah us virginians suck at rails but good at jumps
Nov 19 2011 11:59AM
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Jeff_Lo
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don't hold an effect for a full shot.  Move the camera around more.
Nov 19 2011 12:14PM
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NJurkiewicz
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forget to mention this but I agree with Jeff on this...
Nov 19 2011 12:14PM
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mr.houston
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I liked it but I felt that all the tricks were a little repetitive. I also agree that you should have maybe got more angles for shots. but overall it was good
Nov 19 2011 12:34PM
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.spaghetticat.
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10 10 thanks guys
Nov 20 2011 10:02AM
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