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Some of the cuts didn't make any sense. Sometimes the red pants dude was riding and then like halfway thru you'd cut to something completely different. Some of the cuts were really disorienting too; way too short and fast.
and I'd say you should work on your cuts and angles. There is no need for a cut like that on every shot, try to make things simple at first. Also, make sure the two shots you cut together are one continuous trick. In terms of angles, you had like two that entire time. That gets repetitive, so I'd say you should try some more of those out.