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First website critique

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.monster.
Posts: 99 - Karma: 11
So this is the first website I have made learned ever thing from scratch from online tutorials in about 1 1/2 months every thing is done my hand except the jquery, definitely stoked on it I mean it works for a first site but I have still have a lot to learn, its never good enough and can not wait to learn way more and start making supper sick sites, Thanks please no hate

http://switchoneapparel.com
Nov 18 2011 9:55AM
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ChuckTesta
Posts: 960 - Karma: 258
some of those hoodys are dope....i willl defineatley try to order the rasta one
Nov 18 2011 10:40AM
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juicedrummer11
Posts: 1960 - Karma: 1,331
pretty sick, only thing i could find that i didn't like about it was the menu buttons at the top were all crammed together after i was in one of the pages, maybe space them out a lil
Nov 18 2011 12:49PM
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oil.
Posts: 2255 - Karma: 1,254
yeah agree with the above poster on the menus. pretty good though i like it
Nov 18 2011 12:56PM
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nkmo.
Posts: 3994 - Karma: 285
Slow down the image scrolling.

Have someone who understands the English language proof read your copy. There is a ton of stuff going wrong in there.

Your "who we are" section is entirely too long across the page. Aim for 40-60 characters.

Format your copy so you don't have so many weird line breaks.
Nov 18 2011 1:10PM
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