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Just Made My First Beat.... +K For Critiques!!!

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thisandthatfilms
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alright so i sampled this track form this song




and came out with this!



Calculations by JackAtkinsMedia



TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!


also just sent this to my friend to rap over
Nov 7 2011 9:57PM
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*Fujative*
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Kinda crazy from the sample but I dig it.
Nov 7 2011 10:04PM
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thisandthatfilms
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yeah it'll be better tomorrow when its not only an instrumental
Nov 7 2011 10:05PM
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juicedrummer11
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Basement Bass...
Hip Hop Heavy Kit...
Im guessing you used Logic Studio?? (I am very picky with music)

not bad tho for your very first beat, keep playin around with different sounds and even making your own tweaks and adjustments to the preset sounds. i like how you sampled that tho very nice.
Nov 8 2011 12:50AM
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stevyc
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not bad dude, for a first edit its a sick effort, keep churning them out!
Nov 8 2011 4:21AM
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thisandthatfilms
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Bump
Nov 9 2011 1:17AM
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maxro
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nice dude! sounds a lot like Prefuse 73 to me
Nov 10 2011 2:26AM
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thisandthatfilms
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Try And Stop Me by JackAtkinsMedia


NEW

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NEW~!!!!
Nov 10 2011 6:58PM
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panojibber
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Sick!
Those sounded good, I like the minimalism.

I felt like there was a lack of a sense of contrast in them though, like the 2 samples you used carried each song all the way through - not too much variation. I guess a rapper could provide the contrast but its still good to have it in the beats - I'm sure you're thinking in well-defined musical sections, I feel like you could make them pop more though.

There is a ton of great material on this website, especially free samples:
http://hiphopmakers.com/
Nov 10 2011 7:27PM
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thisandthatfilms
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+k thanks man


checking out that website now
Nov 10 2011 7:30PM
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EnoughBeats
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hey i like hip hop makers bro, but I have my favorite 3 Music Production Websites;

https://www.producersbuzz.com/ - Drum Samples and Drum Loops
https://www.sfxbuzz.com/ - Free Sound Effects
https://www.mysoundpacks.com/ - Free Melody Loops and Sound Packs


Also, this is my simple studio setup
- Safire 6 Sound Card
- KRK Rokit 6 Gen3
- M-audio Oxygen 49 Keyboard
- i7 Desktop Pc with 16 GB ram

Thanks - PAV Beatz

Have fun producing and add me on Instagram @pav beatz
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