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Webisode ep.3 - Critique please

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*pbartram*
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Now I know that recently there has been talk in M&A about posting your stuff on here to get more exposure but I genuinely want your opinion and feedback on my stuff. I appreciate that my stuff probably looks amateurish but im working on it and every but of feedback gives me new ideas and helps me get better.



So please leave a comment telling me what you think.
Oct 31 2011 6:23PM
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RoryAMB
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Sick edit I really enjoyed it.
One thing i would say is that in some of those shots on the kicker segment they seemed a bit underexposed with the colours kind of spoiled. You may have had your shutter speed cranked up at bit high meaning less light was let in. Apart from that it was good.
Nov 1 2011 6:27PM
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I.B
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Looked good, Skiing was eh, but that doesn' matter.

The songs ran a little long, Kinda boring in parts.

But I liked it.
Nov 1 2011 6:54PM
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*pbartram*
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Ye i know the skiing isn't the best but we are learning. So my edits in the future should have bigger and better tricks.

I know what you mean about the song, the first one did drag on a bit and I think i could have cut drown the off piste bit, although I thought it was nice to get the whole run in. I think i could have also taken a few shots out of the first bit, but o well. Glad you liked it and thanks for the feedback.
Nov 1 2011 7:32PM
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robert77
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I was diggin the vibe, and lots of the shots looked pretty decent, level of skiing was pretty low but overall it was a chill vibe, looked like you guys were having fun. I liked it.
I will say I laughed at the guys goggle setup at the very start though haha
Nov 1 2011 9:47PM
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*pbartram*
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Ha ye he does need to get some new googles, bit of a retro look at the moment.
Nov 3 2011 5:38PM
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