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Roachey
Posts: 611 - Karma: 209
Hey NS,

This is one of my first edits with FCP7 and a GoPro. Just filmed my friend at the skatepark for about an hour and made an edit with him. I played around with the 3 way color correction alot and thought it looked cool so I kept it this way. Tell me what you think

ALL CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISCM WILL RECIEVE +K
PLEASE WACTH IN HD

Thanks,
Will
Oct 22 2011 10:45PM
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erikK
Posts: 3245 - Karma: 2,329
toooo much slomo
Oct 22 2011 11:11PM
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Roachey
Posts: 611 - Karma: 209
okay thanks +k
Oct 22 2011 11:12PM
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lukewalnuts
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Oct 22 2011 11:57PM
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k-fred
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the song didnt goes with the video,definitly too much slowmo like the guy said above and try to film all the body of the skater(we dont see your friend head). dont be afraid to shoot from further away.

Oct 23 2011 12:15AM
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a.bott
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Bump for Salisbury skatepark used to skate there haha
Oct 23 2011 12:20AM
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west-coast
Posts: 985 - Karma: 204
all of the shots looked too cold, maybe color correct them to be slightly warmer, just my opinion though..i thought the filming was average and the song was alright..its hard to have a great edit with skating thats not amazing
Oct 23 2011 12:26AM
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j.benziger
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If you color corrected the clips it would be way better also the song didnt flow with the edit.
Oct 23 2011 11:45AM
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Roachey
Posts: 611 - Karma: 209
Ya I was gunna chose a different one but he wanted that song so I tried my best to make it work but +k to all of you thanks.
Oct 23 2011 12:20PM
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