Replying to Whatcha think? *Edit Critique*

Here is a little edit I put together of me working in the tune shop in Skjersaa's Ski & Board in Bend, OR.  Messing around with some color correction, dolly shots, assign buttons on my camera for focus play, etc.  Criticism welcome and appreciated.
Shot with:
Sony HDV-Z1U
Home-built dolly
Edited with:
Final Cut 5.0.4

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