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Whatcha think? *Edit Critique*

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cnote
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Here is a little edit I put together of me working in the tune shop in Skjersaa's Ski & Board in Bend, OR.  Messing around with some color correction, dolly shots, assign buttons on my camera for focus play, etc.  Criticism welcome and appreciated.
Shot with:
Sony HDV-Z1U
Home-built dolly
Edited with:
Final Cut 5.0.4

<iframe src="http://player.vimeo.com/video/30720121?title=0&byline=0&portrait=0" width="600" height="338" frameborder="0" webkitAllowFullScreen allowFullScreen></iframe>
Oct 18 2011 1:32PM
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cnote
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Oct 18 2011 1:41PM
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screamin_seamen
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:45 was a rad shot!!!!!
Overall that was dope man. I can tell you were probably a bit bored, with these types of shots maybe grab a homie and make a short film before the season?
Oct 18 2011 2:00PM
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juicedrummer11
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this...

and i thought the opening shot was pretty neat and sort of a cool way of doing it but the last time you used that same look for a close up and not close up in the same shot maybe put them side by side or on top of each other to mix it up, just a thought, nice tho

Oct 18 2011 2:14PM
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Davin
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that artsy edit just blew my mind. very different and good.
Oct 18 2011 5:52PM
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cnote
Posts: 30 - Karma: 10
Yeah totally, tryin' to stay entertained and working by myself...
I hear ya on the split screen shots, the first one I was stoked on and the second I was up in the air (thought all the different colors and contrasts was cool) wasn't the best format for showing it off though.
Thanks guys, any other pointers, critiques, criticisms are appreciated.
Oct 18 2011 6:43PM
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Jpurd
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i really liked it! like that was not boring and fun to watch haha
Oct 18 2011 8:37PM
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