well it definitely could have used some skrillex and a maybe a shit ton of twixtor with bad blending, that woulda been better....
with that being said
.. i really liked the color grading for sure and song choice was perfect and for the film burns i thought you used those well, i think thats a good effect for vids like this, and i liked a lot of the shots and how they were filmed
it was a little long for the kind of edit it was IMO, cut it down to about 3 min and it would be rock solid for the internet
overall, pretty good except for the lack of shitty twixtor and some skrillex :s