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CrotchKiller
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I made this one minute edit for a class and i know it can use some constructive criticism

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Oct 11 2011 1:30PM
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CrotchKiller
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apparently my embed skills do
Oct 11 2011 1:33PM
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Blurst
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video is private, can't watch.
Oct 11 2011 2:03PM
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Blurst
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shit nevermind
Oct 11 2011 2:04PM
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Brock.sux
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to many cuts... kind of over edited at a few parts, also the twixtor had warping and was unneeded. The filming was great though.
Oct 11 2011 2:23PM
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CrotchKiller
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can you be specific on the over edited parts? i know what your saying though
Oct 11 2011 2:26PM
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WillStart
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i would say stay away from overlays basically all the time. i can't think of the last time i saw an overlay in a non-professional production that i thought looked good.


i also thought the filming was quite good, and while i'm not a fan of the tilt shift thing, that first shot was pretty solid. there were definitely too many cuts; i liked your shots and i wanted to see the whole clips play out.
Oct 11 2011 2:41PM
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CrotchKiller
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alright thanks a bunch! i got rid if all the overlays. im working on getting rid of a lot of the cuts. Its just a little bit difficult because the edit can only be 1 minute and we did some reallllly slow pans and such. Just trying to fit a lot of footage into a minute
Oct 11 2011 2:46PM
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EC-Skier
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Well what everyone has already said, and i think the first timelapse is a little bright, and could be darkened a little
Oct 11 2011 3:06PM
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CrotchKiller
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Oct 11 2011 5:51PM
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CrotchKiller
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scrapping everything and starting over
Oct 11 2011 8:10PM
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