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Video: Graffiti-Jam

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[skier.]
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I made an edit about three artists spraying (legally) at a Graffiti-Jam in Emmen Switzerland.
I know, the colors could def. be better... ;)
but otherwise... what's good - what's not?





[http://www.vimeo.com/30375589]

thx for your time!
Oct 11 2011 11:41AM
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GorillaSteez03
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Good job man!  I liked how you added in some lifestyle/nature shots without really taking away from the painting.  Classic song choice too!  One thing that I might have liked to have seen would be better, more up-close shots of the finished pieces. 
Oct 11 2011 3:31PM
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[skier.]
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thanks man!
You are absolutly right in that point, I should have taken more shots of the end... but I had to leave the place earlier, so I wasn't able to do that.

keep the constructive criticism coming!
Oct 11 2011 4:49PM
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Merrill
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I loved the shot where the camera was mounted to the spray can!
Oct 11 2011 5:00PM
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[skier.]
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> way to use GoPro off-hill!
Oct 11 2011 5:24PM
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Official_Recap
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I actually really like the soft, desaturated look of the colors. It is very fitting with the song and the soft focus shots.
One quick thing - try to not cut to black. There is a section somewhere in the middle that you cut to the beat to black a few times in a row that was pretty distracting.
Oct 11 2011 6:26PM
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