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Mammoth Oct. 5

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LT
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Threw together an edit from the storm we got this week. Used plenty of shots that weren't that great. Just used them for the hell of it since it's only a lil preseason edit. Didn't bother with any color correcting or spend too much time editing. Critique if you'd like to. Enjoy

Link if embed didn't work: https://www.newschoolers.com/watch/369837.0/Mammoth_Oct__5th_?c=11


Oct 9 2011 1:55AM
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Dub_Digital
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sick as fuck looks so fun, lucky man


..only thing I saw was ur "fade to black" was pretty repetetive, maybe try not to do it as mucch
Oct 9 2011 4:21AM
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Jibbin_Ur_Face
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So sick! Yee Nolan!
Oct 10 2011 1:07AM
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Jaymon
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so i thought it was pretty rad, good vibe, clean yet greasy.

reminds me of the real media guys but not quite as well put together imo

critiques: no more water ripple transitions, and please land on your feet, not the last quarter of your skis every time and think it looks steezy/non-chalant
Oct 10 2011 1:10AM
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blatt
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My one suggestion would be to acquire a tripod
Oct 10 2011 2:08AM
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LT
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Thanks for the critiques. I have a tripod just didn't feel like using it that day. And I can't control the way other people ski, I know I was landing on my feet.
Oct 10 2011 12:34PM
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Gknow
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Smooth edit, I liked it. One suggestion, in addition to laying low on the fade to blacks, is use some other creative transition that goes with the flow.

right on
Oct 10 2011 5:10PM
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