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ClassyGroup
Posts: 230 - Karma: 50


Hey, just starting to post edits on NS and was wondering if you guys had any feed back? +K to any constructive criticism
Sep 26 2011 7:50PM
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McFellon
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I think the strongest part of the edit was the intro. It was pretty creative and well done. Weakest part is the line of boxes/ rails. The follow shots got kinda repetitive, so that part could have used some different angles. I feel that this was issue augmented by the by the song, which also seemed kinda repetitive. You'll probably get some more in depth feedback, this was just my overall impression of the edit.
Sep 26 2011 9:02PM
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yeahno
Posts: 4008 - Karma: 3,414
as was said above, repetitive shots. more creative shots wud be nice. and with filming jumps. like the first rodeo 5. spend less time from first angle, cut to about halfway of the landing shot. just a suggestion
Sep 26 2011 9:25PM
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screamin_seamen
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Boring shots. Quality export though! Definitly some potential, I would say maybe spend some more time getting creative shots/weird shots.
Sep 26 2011 10:07PM
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hollygrove
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Like everything else is this world, the more you do/observe, the better you will become. Keep up with filming and editing as well as watching edits and you will naturally progress and push yourself forwards with each piece of work you finish. I've always felt that that's the best way to develop your own style and idea behind your work and that's what will ultimately animate the viewer best. So keep doing you're doing man! I like it!
Also that was a fucking massive drop to flat off that thing.
Sep 26 2011 10:36PM
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ClassyGroup
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Thanks for the feedback homies, I'll Keep it in mind
Sep 27 2011 10:58PM
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