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Turned out sick yo good job

thanks. FUCK, FORGOT TO TURN OFF AUTOPLAY!!! SORRY.

that was ill! i really liked what you did at the end part by matching the audio with the video! sick job!

thanks +k to both of you for bumping it up

that was sick, sucks about being colorblind haha. the shot of the flag or pennant or whatever at the beginning was shaky. So were a few of the shots of the foam pit jump ( you should have taken those out) and a few of the jumps at the end. Also in the whaleback section I think there were 3 front 2's in a row and they kinda stood out to me as not belonging with the rest of the banger tricks on those rails. Overall I liked it though, and your friends kill it. Sorry for the paragraph im on mobile ns

thanks dude, +k. all the shots from woodward i had my old tripod from walmart, and some other ones were just shot without a tripod. Thanks for pointing out the tricks, ill keep that in mind.

BALUMP

BOMP

i really like your style of filming.
thats a dope edit my friend.

Good job man!

Couple things:
-Could have probably been shorter. As you keep making videos you will learn what shots really deserve to be in the edit and what don't quite make the cut.
-Try to avoid ever cutting in the middle of a trick.
-The non-fixed aperture shouldn't be much of an issue because frankly, you shouldn't ever be zooming on a DSLR while filming, especially with a lens like that. You lose focus as you zoom in (unlike a normal video camera) and the focus ring is too jerky to get a smooth zoom. One of the downsides of DSLR's. The zoom can be used for effect (for instance, I did a really quick zoom back in one of my videos to add to the shaky, handheld feel), but slow zooms (especially if you're zooming in) are pretty much out of the question.

thanks, +k to both of you. i like zooming, but i know it screws things up, i just wont zoom anymore. I'll work a lot this winter on making my edits better