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Small ad I worked on, critiques and feedback!

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kzrstf
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For a friend who makes bijoux, like earrings, bracelets, necklace, etc.
Looking for feedback! thanks


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Aug 31 2011 8:17PM
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B1kessk1s
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stais bon ........mais jai su seulement a la fin du commercial que cetait une annonce de bijoux.... p-e mettre un peu plus l'emphase sur les bijoux........
Aug 31 2011 8:34PM
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family_vacation
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I feel left out :(


and I thought it was awesome. The only thing that bothered me was that you put the actors against a brick wall. Those are almost guaranteed to create a lot of aliasing, so I would avoid that in the future.
Aug 31 2011 8:47PM
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MatRich
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take off frame blending, it jumps out at me as amateur. I dont know if im feeling the titles at the end. I like how its designer style to cut the frame but maybee not in this particular way.
Sep 1 2011 12:55PM
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kzrstf
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i didnt do the editing but thanks man!
Sep 1 2011 5:58PM
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MothaHucker
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i kept thinking the guy in white was gonna pull a gun... other than that looked solid to me, but i dont know 2 shits about video editing.
Sep 1 2011 6:21PM
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sarajuana
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i really liked that !!
Sep 1 2011 6:49PM
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basedjase
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Looked really good dude, I like it a lot.
Only two things I'd change to it.
-I agree with the font, kinda amature ish. Didn't blend in. The split screen thingy was kinda cool.
-When she takes her glasses off, a close shot straight on of her shades coming off her eyes would have been kinda cool IMO.
But good work.
Sep 1 2011 7:21PM
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SkiThe603
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pretty cool ad
Sep 1 2011 7:44PM
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