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B-active. watch and critique please!

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[-mvee-]
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heres my latest short edit of summer activities. my second edit will have actual (good) wakesurfing too.
critique if you could too...colors, shots, etc. its nothing too crazy but i thought ns might enjoy it and give me some useful tips for next time.




Aug 2 2011 11:31PM
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Dwarftosser1
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A couple things I noticed:

1. Way too many out of focus shots got a little annoying
2. Some shaky shots, especially in the beginning. I've never filmed off a boat but I guess it's probably hard to stabilize well.
3. The water ripple effect is a little amateur in my opinion
I liked the shots at the end with the close up of the wake boarder, made me feel like I was in the water watching. I enjoyed it and will look forward to seeing some more.
Aug 2 2011 11:48PM
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skituner
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1. i know music is "personal preference" but please pick a better song, shitty rap is has been done a million times, get creative
2. shaky shots
3. unnecessary long clips
4. out of focus shots. it looks like your shooting on a dslr so learn how to focus better and shot at high apertures so your depth of field is bigger
Aug 3 2011 12:36AM
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[-mvee-]
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thanks man. yeah i meant to have the shaky shot of the tree...it was supposed to be like a sway idk.
and the water ripple was indeed cheese. haha.
Aug 3 2011 10:55AM
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will_powder
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The longboarding segment was incredibly boring and unnecessary. We all know you can ride straight down a 3% grade.
Aug 3 2011 2:52PM
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[-mvee-]
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my newer video! check it out and tell me what you think. not much different but nooo longboarding.....



Aug 8 2011 11:01AM
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[-mvee-]
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bumping for my second video
Aug 10 2011 2:49PM
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