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A_Z_DoubleEE
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this is a snippet from a beat im working on...theres basically no composition right now but what do people think of it?

Jul 31 2011 12:22AM
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holy.shep
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i only listened to the beginning but it seemed really choppy, make it smoother, unless you were going for choppy and edgy, but in that case i am not a fan
Jul 31 2011 12:39AM
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2L208
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yeah start over
Jul 31 2011 1:53AM
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TACO-DOG.exe
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Check yo self, then put the thread in media and arts yo! Dey always know whut to do!
Jul 31 2011 1:58AM
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RudyGarmisch
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What WAS that?
Jul 31 2011 1:59AM
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MN_Nice
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Yikes. That sounded good to you?
Jul 31 2011 2:03AM
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muFFn
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Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...well...uhhhmmmmmmm...

There's potential, but not much is really solid. I'd fine tune it a bit and make it less choppy.
Jul 31 2011 2:06AM
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Dainsey
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start from the last six seconds...then it could have potential
Jul 31 2011 2:26AM
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HermioneGranger
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Ewww.
Jul 31 2011 2:34AM
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Broken_Rides
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Sounds like midgets getting kinky with cow prodders.

Jul 31 2011 4:12AM
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Candy
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The beat you are working on isn't much of a beat. I'd say that's a good place to start.
Jul 31 2011 4:31AM
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ILLinoisance
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I feel like if there was a soundtrack for an abortion, this would be it.
Jul 31 2011 4:50AM
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Woodenshjips
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make it more smooth fer sure super choppy
Jul 31 2011 4:58AM
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Master_Debater
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Sig'd
Jul 31 2011 2:39PM
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jibmeisterflex
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Jul 31 2011 3:12PM
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Astomp
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i think i can tell what your going for...but im drunk. that dun nu nu nu dun nu nu nu needs to be sped up and the higher chirping needs to be when thedun nu nu nu starts.
Jul 31 2011 4:31PM
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MN_Nice
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lmao
Jul 31 2011 4:32PM
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syrup.
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Drunk knowledge. Always epic.
Jul 31 2011 4:35PM
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A_Z_DoubleEE
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haha this is pretty funny...first of all no i dont think its very good just thought id put it up cause i put it up on soundcloud for a friend to hear what i was doing.....it is choppy that was spose to be more of a build up to the last 6 seconds...which i actually really like where the beat drops at the end.
Jul 31 2011 9:51PM
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elemeno89
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use a metronome to get the beat placements right. build up to the bass track. and add melodies after a good intro. not terrible, but it does need work.
Jul 31 2011 10:20PM
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Basement.
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that was fucking awful. you can't give advice on that because there's nothing to go from. if someone asks you for advice on their cake and they give you a pan full of shit how are you supposed to react?


just. give. up.
Jul 31 2011 10:24PM
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saucybiscuits
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that was really bad.
Jul 31 2011 10:26PM
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ILLinoisance
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teet swits.
Jul 31 2011 10:26PM
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blackmamba.
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didn't really flow all that well to be honest. layering that shit is key
Jul 31 2011 10:28PM
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