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Critique Edit!!!! +k for any feedback

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BayArea
Posts: 310 - Karma: 111
hey ns,

just finished my new edit for Kyle Lanham. He sent me footage, therefore i had no control over camera angles, steadiness, etc. Just tell me what you think on my editing and song choice. +k for any type of feedback. if you dont like the edit, comment and tell me why!

thanks


Jul 29 2011 11:50PM
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plorr
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Just awful. Sorry but that song was fucking atrocious. The Starry eyed dubstep remix would have been a better choice than that club banger mashup garbage.

Also consider changing your name. You don't exactly want to advertise that you are a crew of 15 year olds. Using names that end in "Films/productions/media" is pretty played anyway.

Other than that I guess the editing was okay? Your cuts seemed to be timed pretty well to the god awful track you picked. And there weren't TOO many cheesy effects goin on.
Jul 30 2011 12:02AM
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BayArea
Posts: 310 - Karma: 111
hahaha alright harsh but solid feedback...thanks bro i will make sure to not use songs like that again!
Jul 30 2011 12:05AM
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SSteezle
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the editing seemed alright but it was hard to even focus while listening to that
Jul 30 2011 12:17AM
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Stose
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i actually didnt mind the music. i thought the edit was pretty dope. i liked where u would slow it down, but there was one part where i was like why did he slow it down there? thats not that cool? the flash effect was nice too. i just thought it was altogether a nice edit for what type of footage you were given. i would pay someone to make me an edit like that
Jul 30 2011 12:30AM
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BayArea
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thanks bro! haha you can send me footy anytime and ill make you an edit!
Jul 30 2011 12:42AM
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Stose
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id pay you to do it
Jul 30 2011 12:44AM
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BayArea
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pm'd
Jul 30 2011 12:47AM
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