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Season Edit Critique

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Mr_pretzel
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Park shots from this season, would love some feedback on this.

Takk takk.
Jul 17 2011 9:38AM
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Mr_pretzel
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Come on guys.
Jul 18 2011 3:11AM
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eheath
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What exactly are you looking for feedback on? im confused
Jul 18 2011 3:20AM
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Mr_pretzel
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Editing, flow, anything really.
Jul 18 2011 3:26AM
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eheath
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well, i can tell you didnt try to do anything with color, so ill skip that

the song was used, many times, sick song but be original.

im guessing you guys didnt try to hard with the filming, but alot of it is shaky and some of it is just way too far away.


I thought it flowed decently, editing was fine. overall not terrible.
Jul 18 2011 3:30AM
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Mr_pretzel
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Thank exactly what i was looking for.

But one thing, what edit has used this song before?
Jul 18 2011 3:31AM
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eheath
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It was in after lame or lame, by robot food, pretty big time snowboard movie. Plus, its definitely been in other edits, maybe nothing big, but this song is pretty popular and pretty well known as an "used" song.
Jul 18 2011 4:05AM
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.RYAN66
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clothes werent big enough so i didnt watch.

but seriously the editing was pretty good as eheath said, the days where it wasnt sunny it didnt look to good. you're clothes fit proparly which i liked. But you did not use poles which sorta pissed me off idk way.
Jul 18 2011 8:31AM
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[-mvee-]
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:47 for some reason i thought was a dope shot.
it wasnt a bad edit. the only thing that bothered me was a few times when you landed a trick, and right away you looked back at the camera man. that might be just me, but thats a pet peeve of mine that ive had.
Jul 18 2011 11:40AM
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