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Fruit boot edit

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Be@stco@st
Posts: 159 - Karma: 19

Hey just finished my friends fruit boot edit and I'm looking for a critique. Any advice or complaints would be great, thanks.

Jul 2 2011 8:22PM
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cwillygood
Posts: 6831 - Karma: 1,829
it wasnt bad....but i had to stop watching it cuz the music was completely blown out and had some seriously bad quality haha
Jul 2 2011 8:32PM
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SkiThe603
Posts: 5376 - Karma: 498
unlike the kid above me i stopped watch because in the first 6 shots or so, you could see another cameraman and or a camera, that just kinda made me stop
Jul 2 2011 8:59PM
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screamin_seamen
Posts: 619 - Karma: 551
Kids not very impressive
Jul 2 2011 9:52PM
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.Max.
Posts: 2930 - Karma: 701
Watched half of it, gave up.

To start, the song and sound in general, need I say more?

That border thing you did served no purpose, it was visually unappealing, and accentuated the edges of the frame. Don't use that anymore.

Colors were way too saturated.

B camera was in tons of shots.

The list goes on...

Sorry for being harsh, it could really use improvement though.
Jul 2 2011 10:02PM
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Be@stco@st
Posts: 159 - Karma: 19
thanks to all
Jul 19 2011 9:49AM
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Stickity
Posts: 7750 - Karma: 769
he did one grind and it was missed.
Jul 19 2011 10:42AM
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the.cheat
Posts: 2859 - Karma: 171
quit showing b cam, stop using the softbox or whatever it is around the edges, work on the colors/saturation, and get a new title font/color. it looks like it came straight out of a 12 year old girls youtube video.
Jul 20 2011 2:12AM
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