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Critique my artsy edit +k
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Shots at 0:15 had a black box around the edges, that's an easy crop, just a few shots were a little shaky & the ending was a little abrupt I felt with the lightning that could have been more of a climax rather then conclusion & the music faded really fast. Other then that it was chill and really nice.
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thanks, i was gunna add skate to it, but the skate trip never happened, im trying to figure out how to make the fade slower. +k
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Everything shredability said.
On a side note, it's one of my pet peeve's when people film nature with a shallow depth of field and call it "Artsy". To me, art is an expression, it means something, displaying some knowledge of how a camera works doesn't cut it as artsy for me.
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well said, good edit tho!
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i didnt really know what to call it, i usually make ski edits, just considered it more artsy then my other edits
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I was waiting for the Statefarm guy to start talking telling me I need to feel secure or something, but very good edit. Definitely get a tripod for some of those shots, but again, really good, keep it up man
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