1st video:
-too many cuts, i would have looked to have just seen the shot play through
-color grading was too strong. colors were too warm, snow was completely blown out, and the vignette was too strong. did you use the blockbuster look in magic bullet? that's kind of what it looks like
-sick title, and the way it transitioned into the shot was cool
-the twixtor stuff was held for waaay too long throughout the edit. it should really only go from one beat to the next. and its kind of a good idea to just avoid twixtor as much as possible since so many people use it now
-i would work on getting really solid shots rather than focus as much on the editing. i think that if it weren't for all the cuts, extreme grading, and twixtor, the shots might not have stood out so much. you want to be able to get shots that you hardly need to do anything to to make them dope.
2nd video:
-once again, shots are way too warm, vignette is way too strong, white are way too blown out.
-the one question interview in the beginning could/should have been tossed, it was just kinda awkward
-dope title, you're super good at those
-for slow motion, you should find a way to conform your clips to 24p instead of just using the slow motion tool in your editing program. this will help you avoid the ghosting on some of your shots
-too many cuts again. just let the shot play, it makes it easier to watch
-again, work on the composition of your shots rather than relying on grading so much
just some things to consider for your next edits. good work though! i enjoyed watching them
