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*CRITIQUE MY EDIT PLEASE*

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EC-Skier
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title says it, first edit for my summer season edits. Rate, like, what could i fix?



May 31 2011 10:12PM
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EC-Skier
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+k will be given
May 31 2011 10:50PM
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skituner
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shots were decent but nothing special, and im pretty sure everyone else will agree with me when i say please try to get more creative with your music choice, thug hip hop is soooo played
May 31 2011 10:56PM
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screamin_seamen
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I turned it off cause the musics gay as fuck! Get rid of it!!!!!!!!
May 31 2011 11:13PM
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.spaghetticat.
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WIDESPREAD MEDIA: SUMMER SHENANIGANS #1 from Widespread Media on Vimeo.


Jun 7 2011 3:38PM
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S.C
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yea the music needs to change, but good skiing, alright editing, alright shots. Editing was pretty good, just nothing special though.
Jun 7 2011 4:16PM
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Brentizzle
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angles where super repetitive. when you edit, mix the angles together so it gets the viewer more interested. The last bit of that edit was so sick and i really liked the angles where you could see the landing and hated the ones from up top. Those two kids killed it. so sick
Jun 7 2011 4:33PM
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assface
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all of this
Jun 7 2011 4:50PM
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EC-Skier
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+k to advice, i asked our crew what they wanted the next edit to be like, they all wanted a thug edit, so thats what i made. I agree with the shots thing, most of the shots i had were from the top, so i jst decided to put those all together. Thanks
Jun 7 2011 5:10PM
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monkatizer
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shots got a bit repetitave and mad boring twards the middle-end, (the ones from just above the jump) other then that it was a pertty decent edit and i enjoyed it
Jun 7 2011 5:31PM
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EC-Skier
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yah i agree, +k
Jun 7 2011 6:23PM
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Tanner-D
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Flowed with the music well but I didn't dig your intro title it was a little to flashy for my taste.
Jun 7 2011 8:54PM
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EC-Skier
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thanks for the advice, were messing around with logos at the moment, trying to find one that works
Jun 7 2011 10:33PM
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pr4l
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from a viewing standpoint i liked the music, it went with the edit well in my opinion you guys were stomping the landings. it was sick to watch. the only thing i would say is why dont you use the gopro footage with the other footage so we can see you land half of the jumps?
Jun 7 2011 11:13PM
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EC-Skier
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hahaha, the girl "filming" had it on the pics setting without knowing, so we have no shots from that aha
Jun 8 2011 9:57AM
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JibbaTheHutt
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why wear goggles on dryslope may i ask? edit was good but never keen on re-using songs from movies...there are alwasy song that fit just as well if not better
Jun 8 2011 1:05PM
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EC-Skier
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we wear goggles cause its really bright out, and so water doesnt get in your eyes. i honestly didnt know this song was used in ahmets bonus until after i posted it
Jun 8 2011 1:07PM
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B1kessk1s
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weird colors, off focus shots.... other than that i enjoyed it !
Jun 8 2011 5:25PM
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.Max.
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Definitely time to work on your colors.
Jun 8 2011 8:03PM
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EC-Skier
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yah, i didnt play with any colors. i need to start working with that.
Jun 8 2011 8:36PM
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[J_Gasper]
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i liked the song, one of my favorites by chip. skiing was insanely good IMO. so much style on rails. Color correcting could have done well, the editing it self (without CC) was pretty good, i liked the intro and the beggining. some shots were a bit shaky and some weird angles, but over all i thought it was really really sick
Jun 8 2011 9:16PM
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EC-Skier
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thanks dude, ill work on colors
Jun 8 2011 10:24PM
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