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End of Season Edit Critique

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Yung_Gnarley
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J. Knill 2010/2011 Season Edit (Powder) from Jack Knill on Vimeo.



This is my edit from all my best GoPro pow shots. Give me a lil feedback please. Thanx boiz.
May 21 2011 2:53PM
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TaranItUp
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Alot of cool shots here, looked like a fun year. Maybe just work on the editing a little bit more.
May 21 2011 2:55PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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What was wrong with the editing?
May 21 2011 2:57PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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bump
May 22 2011 4:29PM
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TaranItUp
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Try editing to a song, and maybe add a little color correction to the over exposed or under exposed shots to make it more appealing.
May 22 2011 4:45PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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What the fuck? haha
May 22 2011 4:55PM
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alvy.
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what he means is to make the shots flow with the song. like having a cliff synced with the beat of the music, shots changing with the flow of it. It makes the edit 10 times better then just throwing a song in
May 22 2011 5:36PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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...I did that I believe.
May 22 2011 6:21PM
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.frenchy
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That was pretty dope.. Sick pow shots, and some nice lines.

Making me miss the winter so so much haha

May 22 2011 10:18PM
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HeadyTopper
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editing to a song takes a ton of practice, i'm still perfecting and i've been working on edits for a long time. i like your shots and it is such a sweet edit, good work man.
May 23 2011 4:41PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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bump
May 25 2011 3:11PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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another bump i guess
Jul 16 2011 3:37AM
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andrew95
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you asked for peoples thoughts so he gave you his, dont be a dick because he is trying to help you out
Jul 16 2011 9:20AM
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Yung_Gnarley
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Just creating dialogue. No reason to stress.
Jul 16 2011 8:55PM
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cashdebt
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theres not much to critique with strictly pov edits as this one. The things i look for are the overall feel of the edit and the quality of each line. Editing to a song, especially this one is difficult if not impossible because you don't have any defined takeoffs, landings, or real points you can match up with music. It flowed well, as any powder edit should, but the song was a pristine choice for this as the chillness was supreme, one might say. I liked the little watermark or whatever you wanna call it. I didn't think it was necessary until i saw the location change and then i appreciated it a lot more. It was settle though so even if it was at big sky the whole time it didn't distract at all. Classy shit. Also good choice in clips. They kept me entertained and made me wanna ski powder. Solid length as well. Powder is great, but if it goes on too long the edit/segment becomes boring and repetivive. I don't even bother watching powder or pov edits over 5 minutes and hesitate when its over 4. Keep that shit up knill.
Jul 17 2011 5:00AM
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Yung_Gnarley
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Thanks Welt.
Jul 18 2011 6:00PM
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