nice! that was dope.
-song is played for sure
-great job with tracking the text in the beginning
-try to do something 'different' with the colors. get a unique look going. if you don't have magic bullet, you should get it for sure
-as a general rule, don't ever show the beginning/ending of camera movement. for example, at 00:12 we see the pan begin, and that makes the viewer very aware that they're watching a video and that somebody was controlling the camera; that creates a separation between the viewer and the video that you don't want. i noticed that several times throughout the edit
-wasn't a fan of the cut to blacks starting at 00:21
-after that, the edit started flowing really, really well. your cut at 1:07 was banger
-when you fade a song for an interview, try to fade it less (you would be surprised how loud the music can be, sometimes a 2 db difference is all you need) and fade it exactly as your interviewee begins talking, not slightly before. this will make the fade less noticeable
