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Artsy edit - let me know your thoughts

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blakroc
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I've done plenty of concert edits and ski edits for our company www.radmediagroup.ca but I made this to show that I could also successfully film other things. Let me know what you think and why. Cheers.
Apr 25 2011 9:01PM
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blakroc
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<iframe src="http://player.vimeo.com/video/22856202?title=0&byline=0&portrait=0&autoplay=1" width="398" height="224" frameborder="0"></iframe>
Apr 25 2011 9:02PM
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Apr 25 2011 9:03PM
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blakroc
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http://vimeo.com/22856202

Apr 25 2011 9:04PM
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IanAvery-Leaf
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you have to use the old embed code

Apr 25 2011 9:04PM
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skijunkiedtm
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you're not artsier than me.
Apr 25 2011 9:34PM
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DirtyDan
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Apr 25 2011 10:14PM
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TaranItUp
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I liked the shots, but could have used some sort of plot to make it more interesting. Or some main subject to help the viewer interested.
Apr 25 2011 10:43PM
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Shredability
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Just caus you pluck a guitar








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That aint fucking bazaar
Apr 25 2011 10:44PM
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tBatt
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It would be better if there was some sort of plot. This just seems like a bunch of b-roll put together.

Some of your pans needed to be slower and I'm guessing your tripod isn't great - they got jerky at times. Also, not every shot has to be a pan. The change in direction seems to be too sudden.

The shot with the lone sea gull on the rock was WAY too short. Looked like a mistake almost.

Clean your lens! It looked like there were a bunch of spots where you can see stuff on it.

The problem with panning every shot it that you can't really define much composition and there is no real subject for the most part. Not bad stuff, but I wouldn't submit it as part of a resume or anything yet.

I liked the focus shots with the people walking, but the focus could be smoother. Same goes for the shot of the dog from the right side.
Apr 25 2011 10:45PM
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