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j_hamborg
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Hey all,

Just want to get your opinions on this edit.


Don't just tell me it sucks and I am a fag. If you want to critique, make it constructive please!

Cheers
Apr 4 2011 3:38PM
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[evan]
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Spring Slush + Spare Footage from Jason Hamborg on Vimeo.

Apr 4 2011 3:44PM
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j_hamborg
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Thanks you! +K
Apr 4 2011 3:46PM
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ktd619
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That was sick! what skis were those?
Apr 4 2011 4:21PM
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j_hamborg
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Thanks, they are Nordica Ace of Spades 177
Apr 4 2011 4:34PM
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A.Eberhard
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The backyard stuff was to stagnant, just watching the same angle over and over again. It gets really boring to watch. The part at the hill though was a lot better though.
Apr 4 2011 7:14PM
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McFellon
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sick! what frame rate is that? could it maybe be a little higher? it's just that some of the shots looked a little, idk, not jerky, but the could have been more flowy. not sure if that makes sense. anyway, i know that i'm not the most expert at this yet, but just my thoughts. great edit though.
Apr 4 2011 9:20PM
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j_hamborg
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The shots were shot on the Nikon D90. So unfortunately the frame rate is like 24fps. So yeah, you do get that jerky feel to the shots. But thanks, I appreciate the feedback!
Apr 5 2011 12:09PM
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holyDINOSAURS
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yeah pretty much move the camera a whole bunch more. everything seemed very still. also, if youre going to do back to back shots of the same still angle, make sure theyre lined up. nothing worse than seening your framing jump a tiny bit between cuts
Apr 5 2011 1:11PM
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j_hamborg
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Bump
Apr 6 2011 1:20PM
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Butt=Tight
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I agree with this, the backyard and first rail shots could have been a little more diverse when it comes to angles other than that super solid... and maybe some more jumps shots. Real fun to watch.
Apr 6 2011 2:01PM
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Shredability
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So sick! You camera placement was good, if you have a friend It might be nice to get some camera motion other then that solid edit
Apr 6 2011 3:59PM
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