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New Edit Looking for Some Feedback

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That_One_Dude
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Sunny Crew has a new edit and we are looking for some feedback on it. I think we have come a long way since our first one in terms of editing, no hate but constructive criticism or props would be a big help. Thanks!
Mar 16 2011 7:03PM
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T.DUDE
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meh. I wasn't really feelin the music.
Mar 16 2011 7:08PM
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MANDER
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only watched a minute of it. no one will take you seriously with those titles. that vignette was waaaaay to powerful. if you are going to use it, make it barely noticeable. intro was way too long.
Mar 16 2011 7:20PM
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wynnyk
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really didn't like the black flashes every single beat, only watched about 30 seconds of it.
Mar 16 2011 7:39PM
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That_One_Dude
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The intro was a little long but i had to get everyone's name in it, but thanks. If possible could someone say what went well? We have been trying new things with each edit and want to know what works. Again thanks and +k for anyone not being a dick.
Mar 16 2011 7:41PM
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pr4l
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shorten the intro, stabilize your shots, make your edit TO the music, and instead of introducing that many people in the beginning just have a list of names at the end.
Mar 16 2011 7:45PM
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Brentizzle
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I thought the colors where good throughout the edit and you did have some pretty sick angles. I thought the song was a little to mellow/slow/wasnt my cup of tea for that edit. Get either a tripod or some way to stabilize your shots and show less of the start of the trick and more of the landing. keep workin on it.
Mar 16 2011 8:20PM
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That_One_Dude
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Thanks alot guys keep em coming
Mar 16 2011 8:42PM
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holyDINOSAURS
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keep your fonts consistent
tripod please
try not to cut off peoples heads
keep your effects consistent. don't do just 1 or two shots with vignette or that glow effect.
dont play anything backwards. looks very amateur.
clean your lens
Mar 16 2011 9:02PM
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That_One_Dude
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Thanks heres one from a few weeks ago that matched up with the music, its a little different style.
Mar 16 2011 9:28PM
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Brentizzle
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a lot of the background noise that you didnt turn down sounded super bad with that song. It really didnt match up to the music that much at all and seemed sorta weird going from certain clips to others. I like that your experimenting with you editing but your first step is to improve your filming skills because editing well filmed footage will make your life much easier. Keep the shred on.
Mar 17 2011 1:10AM
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