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Critique my edits please!
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I like this better than your last one, the song was perfect for it. I don't understand why you did what you did at 2:35 though. Pretty nice overall, I like it at least.
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It felt like you were trying too hard to be artsy. I really don't like time lapses and focusing shots at all because they are overused so much. The song went well with the filler but really didn't fit at all with the type of riding. Dont get me wrong, it was pretty good, it could be better though.
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It was a good edit but like ^^ said too much artsy stuff. i think you should have a little more just straight riding in it. good edit though.
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i liked the first one alot, although it was really artsy, it was still sweet and the dog was awesome.
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some of the close up slow mo shots were eh. and also the font of the titles just isnt doing it for me. but overall it was good
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I always struggle with text and font type so I understand what you're saying if the fonts didn't work for you. As far as too artsy goes, I'm happy the way the edits turned out so besides some of the slo motions I don't think I would have changed too much more. I really do appreciate your comments though, thanks for helping me out. Stay tuned for more if you liked it!
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if you're planning on using a good amount of slo-mo shots in your edits, get a camera that can shoot 60fps, or if you have one that can, then DO IT. it looks so unprofessional to me when you can see the individual frames in a slo-mo shot.
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I could only watch the second one but I really like some of the times lapse shots, especially the one with the stars in the back and cloud up front. Maybe start the edit with more banger tricks like the flips...takes a while to get goin
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yea it does move a little slow. We didn't have a lot of banger footage to choose from since we only went out two nights.
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