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SkierPT
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Yeah yeah video section lol. Just looking for filming advice and editing tips. Thanks!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3dl4IfXLnJI

+k for embed too
Feb 23 2011 9:53PM
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screamin_seamen
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Turned it off the second the song played. jesus there are millions of songs out there. The audio track has alot to do with an edit. Ill start with that pointer there.
Feb 23 2011 9:56PM
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SkierPT
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Is that song overused or something?
Feb 23 2011 9:58PM
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andrew95
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it was pretty cool
filming- it looked foggy, if your using a gopro then get the newest update and that should fix it a bit

skiing- i was shocked to see you throw a front flip but good job... with the spins it kind of looks the same then you dont so a grab or bend..

as for the overall edit it was good i would just not do as much text but good job...
just my toocents
Feb 23 2011 10:01PM
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SkierPT
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Thanks bro. Yeah..working to rid of the pencil steeze lol. +k
Feb 23 2011 10:03PM
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andrew95
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hahah yeah i found it hard to get out of that habit
Feb 23 2011 10:06PM
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S.C
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where was the big mountain, other than that pretty good, but lose the text on the intro
Feb 23 2011 10:51PM
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SkierPT
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Killington...huge compared to what we usually ski
Feb 23 2011 10:53PM
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Lwaghorn
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Gopro can start to look weak in low-lighting. I think you can brighen it up with color correcter to make it look alot better, dont know alot about it but something you might wanna look into for better edits. And ya song is overused.
Skiing was good, kinda in the same stage you are with the whole trying to grab 3s. Maybe get some sort of pole to mount the gopro on so follows are less shaky? Overall deecent edit, just a different song and less text at the beggining but it was good
Feb 23 2011 11:16PM
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LuminatX
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Owned by the fence lol.
other than quality it was cool
Feb 23 2011 11:31PM
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Shenanigans
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Feb 23 2011 11:46PM
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j.benziger
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Ok loose the song the regular beat fine but a bit poser cuz it copying pbp everyday is a Saturday. Other wise maybe start to mess around with transitions
good
Feb 24 2011 12:12AM
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SkierPT
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Dang I had no idea the song was ever used in any edit lol my bad everyone...thought i had a original song
Feb 24 2011 9:33AM
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mseward
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Well actually you have a remix of an overused song, but it was an overall decent edit in my opinion, maybe start to play around with more transitions and maybe if youre really feelin it some color correcting/grading. Overall a good job though, decent riding too.
Feb 24 2011 8:02PM
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ktd619
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PEEK N PEAK FTW!!!!!
Feb 24 2011 8:18PM
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SkierPT
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Yessss
Feb 27 2011 11:04AM
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ASauce
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Throw in some random shots of something random like snow falling to split it up a bit, might add something?
Feb 27 2011 1:10PM
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wait.what
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I'd say use a tripod or some sort of stabilizer, there are some shaky shots but other than that good job.
I really enjoyed the opening :]
Feb 27 2011 11:39PM
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CraigAK
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if you can afford it use a glide cam for the follow cam shots, and use a tripod when you can as well. also some lifestyle shots occasionally give an edit a good touch. keep it up!
Feb 28 2011 4:33AM
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