Replying to Critique my edit?

CVU Winter Carnival 2011 Rail Jam Edit from Peter Hauke on Vimeo.

it is in the video section, but with a vimeo embed. It just takes way too long for me to upload it multiple times. Anyways, I made an edit of a little rail jam at our school, and i wanted to get some critque on it (I don't need critique on the skiing)