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Critique my edit?

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123+ski
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CVU Winter Carnival 2011 Rail Jam Edit from Peter Hauke on Vimeo.



it is in the video section, but with a vimeo embed. It just takes way too long for me to upload it multiple times. Anyways, I made an edit of a little rail jam at our school, and i wanted to get some critque on it (I don't need critique on the skiing)
Feb 23 2011 7:58PM
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123+ski
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btw, feel free to rate and comment the one on my profile if you want
Feb 23 2011 8:03PM
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sskier
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that was actually pretty sweet,i enjoyed it.pretty good editing,needs to be longer next time though.
Feb 23 2011 8:56PM
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blatt
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why is that guy wearing shorts........

good edit though IMO. maybe try more angles.
Feb 23 2011 9:12PM
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.Max.
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I really didn't like the intro... Just didn't appeal to me. Everything else was nice though, the colors were really rich, especially on Asa's bright blue shorts haha. (^He was wearing shorts because it was like 60 degrees out...) Cool edit though I enjoyed it.
Feb 23 2011 10:32PM
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Bro.J._Simpson
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really good but I agree that the intro was kind of lame. Try to get more angles too. Variety is the spice of life. Otherwise it was a really good edit and the track was pretty fresh too.
Feb 23 2011 10:45PM
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