Replying to Edit Critique

Hi NS, making a critique thread for my latest edit. Filmed on a GoPro and a D7000 on a tripod. Second edit ive ever made, wanted to get some feedback/constructive criticism.

Jibsy Edit from Ryan Gilbane on Vimeo.

Rapper of the first song Providence is Doze One, a local rapper from RI, check his stuff out at http://www.dozeoneproductions.com/