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Edit Critique

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jamers
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Hi NS, making a critique thread for my latest edit. Filmed on a GoPro and a D7000 on a tripod. Second edit ive ever made, wanted to get some feedback/constructive criticism.

Jibsy Edit from Ryan Gilbane on Vimeo.


Rapper of the first song Providence is Doze One, a local rapper from RI, check his stuff out at http://www.dozeoneproductions.com/
Feb 16 2011 10:42PM
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SeanTom
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change the song to heavy rap. that'll cover every trait ever in skiing. ever.

but seriously, sick edit. liked the vibe
Feb 16 2011 10:49PM
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jamers
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shmumpity
Feb 17 2011 9:45PM
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SkiThe603
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i enjoyed it the first song fit nicely and just had good feel, nice editing
Feb 17 2011 9:54PM
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.Max.
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Try loosening up that tripod. If you're going to follow the rider out of the shot, then do it. Glitchy/jerky shots and pans (in these circumstances) wasn't very visually appealing, it disrupts the flow of the edit. Over all I liked it, just some fine tuning on the filming and it'll be really good.
Feb 17 2011 10:07PM
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jamers
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bump
Feb 20 2011 6:19PM
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