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bhill2.0
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Two edits I made while on a 4 hour drive. If anyone wants to give me a few suggestions or tips I would gladly take it. Comments Questions Concerns. I don't know if im ready for a demo reel.











Feb 15 2011 3:32PM
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bhill2.0
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<iframe title="YouTube video player" width="640" height="390" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/95QucY3KwP8" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>


<iframe title="YouTube video player" width="640" height="390" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/PwjjZHWcPqU" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe>
Feb 15 2011 3:32PM
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bhill2.0
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What the fuck gives

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PwjjZHWcPqU

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=95QucY3KwP8

Embed for my sake
Feb 15 2011 3:34PM
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Feb 15 2011 4:25PM
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MN_Nice
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I like those! What are you shooting with? T2i?
Feb 15 2011 4:28PM
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Shlogan
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it was kinda annoying to me how much of it was out of focus. recognized currency right away though, so props on that. didn't see the first one
Feb 15 2011 5:40PM
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SkiThe603
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I felt like I was at the Jersey Shore for the first video, sorry it just had that vibe. THe second was cool, seeing the different side of orlando
Feb 15 2011 7:39PM
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bhill2.0
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I was shooting on a Canon 5D Mark ii - 50mm prime Zeiss - 28mm Canon.

Im new to HDSLRS so its hard to manually focus. Im hoping for a rig soon but thanks nigger
Feb 16 2011 1:02AM
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MN_Nice
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Feb 16 2011 1:45AM
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bhill2.0
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i dont see how that hppened what
Feb 16 2011 3:37AM
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eheath
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Surprised some shots were under exposed, also some shitty coloring, maybe learn to color correct? Can't believe you got to shoot those two shit edits with potentially (depending on the zeiss lens) a 6-7 grand setup, which most of the money being in the lens. Did you even shoot 24p?
Feb 16 2011 3:50AM
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bhill2.0
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No I did not shoot at 24. Its not a 7 grand set up either man. Have you ever shot in a club Heath?
Feb 16 2011 3:16PM
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eheath
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You're claiming a zeiss 50mm lens, which one? because the ones i know of that fit on a 5d (without installing a cinema mount) is the 50mm CP which is a $5000 lens.

What's the point of shooting with a 5d if you're not going to use 24p?

And ive never filmed in a club, but i know a couple people who used to all the time and they knew how to make it not a bunch of blow out colors.
Feb 16 2011 3:43PM
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bhill2.0
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Fool, Im getting a hostile tone from you.

http://www.bhphotovideo.com/c/product/583975-REG/Zeiss_1677_817_Normal_50mm_f_1_4_ZE.html

I'm not "claiming" shit, All im getting from you is that I need to color correct a bit. Thanks. But you sound like a stuck up bitch who thinks he knows everything.

I've only had my camera for 2 weeks. I'm pretty happy with the way my footage has come out for having not used a dslr with manual focus lens.
Feb 16 2011 4:00PM
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bhill2.0
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Maybe its just me though.
Feb 16 2011 4:02PM
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eheath
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Alright.


Just film 24p bill, its the best. I didn't mean to sound hostile.
Feb 16 2011 4:09PM
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bhill2.0
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Its all good. ill look into it. I like your redrock footy
Feb 16 2011 4:48PM
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