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Mc_Cals
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Rate and comment please!

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Feb 6 2011 8:59PM
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SkiThe603
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do you have anymore
Feb 6 2011 9:24PM
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Mc_Cals
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a couple but these were just the best ones. What were you looking to see?
Feb 6 2011 10:06PM
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SkiThe603
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i kinda just wanna see a shot with the jump gap and landing in it, it doesn't really show them all at once
Feb 6 2011 10:08PM
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LuminatX
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yeah a nice sequence shot woulda been key
Feb 6 2011 11:58PM
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Mc_Cals
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I have some more that I can put up later, I just don't like them as much cause they're blurry in some spots. The lighting was really shitty
Feb 7 2011 2:13PM
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eheath
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The pictures look weird, its hard to tell whats going on.
Feb 7 2011 2:15PM
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Mc_Cals
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Try enlarging it^
Feb 8 2011 8:08PM
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Mc_Cals
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Wouldn't want it to be cropped and stolen would we?
Feb 8 2011 10:18PM
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Daydreaming
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that's why you make it more transparent but right in the middle.
Feb 8 2011 10:38PM
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Style+eeze
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Sweet gap, but good luck getting that RWD BMW around in the snow...
Feb 8 2011 10:40PM
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Sklar
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i like #2 the best, but none of them are super sharp
Feb 8 2011 10:44PM
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malonius_funk
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the composition in all of these are pretty boring and they're pretty confusing
Feb 8 2011 11:14PM
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malonius_funk
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sorry about the dub post but to add onto my previous post...

1. Get rid of the watermark, or make it smaller...i don't think anyone is going to steal your shit.

2. If you're going to re shoot this get rid of the lurkers in the background, it takes the focus away from the skier.

3. Try to frame the skier more effectively it'll help emphasize him and add to the composition.
Feb 8 2011 11:19PM
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