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mseward
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Any pointers or suggestions?
Feb 5 2011 12:23AM
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E.FARR
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idk if its possible with the jump being small..but maybe a more laid out backflip? that would look a bit sicker but thats just me..
Feb 5 2011 2:09AM
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McFellon
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it's kind of hard to see the skier against the trees. it still looks really good, but maybe with more light from behind the camera would make it more vivid
Feb 5 2011 4:22PM
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Keyjibbs
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It's definitely not a bad start. You seem to have gotten the most frames per second that your camera allows and you showed the trick pretty well. I'd try to work on your exposure, it's a bit underexposed thus making it harder for the skier to pop out from the background. Another thing that could help make the sequence a bit better would be a different angle of the trick. Keep shooting and trying different things but it looks like you got a good start.
Feb 5 2011 8:37PM
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LjayCinema
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wat to busy backround.
Feb 5 2011 10:27PM
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Gnarwall
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blur the background with a wider aperture, try to get better light for the skier so he pops more. Good start though.
Feb 5 2011 11:36PM
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