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My suggestions would be, don't mix black and white shots with full color shots unless it serves a purpose. Flashbacks, thoughts etc.
That one angle you had was kind of cool at the begining but it got annoying after a bit, it's tough but definitely try switching up angles, get creative with them and sometimes it can be really simple footage that makes an awesome edit. Your shot at 1:32 was a great example of that, excellent composition and transition. Then just color/exposure correct your shots. Good job though!