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Please critique my edit

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Pool.
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i know me and my friends are not that good, so i dont need the "get better" comments but can you tell me how the accuall production (editing, filming angles ect) were, i know much is shaky i dont have a tripod and it was totally filmed on a go pro, edited in final cut express
OH AND THE NAME IS AN INSIDE JOKE SO DONT HATE ON THAT

Feb 1 2011 2:06AM
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Pool.
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fuck my embedding never works heres the link +k for an embed
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_rPwez-ztvM
Feb 1 2011 3:08AM
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WillStart
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Feb 1 2011 3:34AM
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Ben.
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Intro was way too long.

You stretched your footage, the aspect ratio was all messed up.

Some of it looked like it was interlaced (no idea how thats possible since a gopro doesnt shoot interlaced....)

You cut off the landings or rails of half the shots.

And you used a deltron song thats been used before, not to mention deltron in general was used into oblivion in like '03.
Feb 1 2011 5:26AM
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Pool.
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ok thanks man, the editing was done by my friend who is too afraid to put in on ns but he appreciates the comments
Feb 1 2011 10:23PM
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SkiThe603
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all of this
Feb 1 2011 10:37PM
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Pool.
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ok this was my input besides the crappy filming (had to use one arm hurt my rotator cuff in my shoulder in the fall in the beginning) but i didnt really know what freeskiing was in 03 so sorry for reusing music
Feb 1 2011 11:55PM
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