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First park edit of the season please critique

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Tanner-D
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I tried to use magic bullets a little bit so I'd like a critique on that. I'm pretty sure I blow out some of the shoots but I just want some other opinions. I'd also really appreciate a critique of the edit overall
1) the vibe
2) color correction with magic bullets (only on a few shots and keep in mind I'm colorblind this was a pretty difficult task)
3) Flow of the edit

I really appreciate any feedback preferably constructive criticism.
Thanks

Jan 23 2011 11:13AM
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Tanner-D
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http://vimeo.com/19057887
Jan 23 2011 11:14AM
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Stickity
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cool
colors did look a little funky in a few of the shots at the beginning
Jan 23 2011 1:21PM
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Tanner-D
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Thanks for the feedback bro and I was thinking the same thing about the beginning myself

Jan 23 2011 5:29PM
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will_powder
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dur

Jan 23 2011 5:42PM
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Tanner-D
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Sorry I did this the first time and I didn't work
Jan 23 2011 6:52PM
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will_powder
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i wasn't making any fun of you
Jan 24 2011 2:46PM
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eheath
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Balance your white and blacks levels before you color grade, aka color correction.
Jan 24 2011 2:51PM
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eheath
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by aka color correction i meant balancing white and black balances = color correction. using magic bullets to improve your image is color grading.
Jan 24 2011 2:52PM
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WillStart
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yes. very common for people to switch the terms color correction for color grade, i even do it sometimes.

but OP, making your image look correct and accurate (good exposure, blacks are really black, whites are really white)=color correction

making your image look cool=color grading

while you can do color correction in magic bullet, i prefer to use the 3-way color corrector in final cut first because it's simple, then move on to magic bullet for grading
Jan 24 2011 3:00PM
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Tanner-D
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hmmm so i have windows and I now know that I need to color correct first then use magic bullets.
Thanks guys I have know idea how to color correct though
Jan 24 2011 6:08PM
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BoardSideDown
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As far as flow goes I felt it was a good edit, with a good variety of skiing, all the skiers brought a little something different and you captured that well. Some shots were shaky, but that was mostly follow shots off of jumps so understandable, maybe make a glidecam if you dont use one already.

Overall good edit! Keep it up man
Jan 24 2011 6:58PM
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[evan]
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I spotted a gypsy.
Jan 24 2011 7:01PM
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mseward
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I liked it alot. Sick job man. But as they all said above,color correct before your color grade!
Sick job though, keep up the good work
Jan 24 2011 7:37PM
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Tanner-D
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First of all thanks for the feedback. Now I have to learn how to color correct. I'm using vegas pro which I know isn't the best software but I'm pretty sure it has color correcting capabilities but does anybody know how to color correct or tips? Maybe a site with the basics?
Jan 24 2011 9:05PM
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COrider
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The flow was really good in my opinion. Like said above it was nice to see each person bring something new to the edit rather than the same thing. I don't really have the eye for all the color corrections but I thought it turned out pretty nice.
Jan 25 2011 12:31AM
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