Member of the Month

KilaTsunami
October, 2024

Online

Welcome to the Newschoolers forums! You may read the forums as a guest, however you must be a registered member to post. Register to become a member today!

Feed back on first edit

profile picture
SlimDunkin.
Posts: 2065 - Karma: 361
I know I shouldnt be posting this in here, but this is the first one I've ever done with FCP7, I know it's not great but I'm really hoping to get better. Constructive criticism is much appreciated, but if your gonna come in here just to shit on me and be ignorant, I ask that you please press the back button now...


Jan 12 2011 8:11PM
0 0
profile picture
D1X
Posts: 402 - Karma: 16
Intro sucked dick, we don't think it was funny.

Pretty good otherwise for a first edit. Stick it in media & arts if you want real feedback..
Jan 12 2011 8:23PM
0 0
profile picture
SlimDunkin.
Posts: 2065 - Karma: 361
Wasn't supposed to be funny, it was supposed to be a filler, and thanks
Jan 12 2011 8:26PM
0 0
profile picture
sagaRIP
Posts: 287 - Karma: 12
Mix in fails with actual tricks, i thought it was just going to be your falling over.

Try to get some different stuff, the same rail for 1 minute is boring.

I thought the intro was quite funny.
Jan 12 2011 8:26PM
0 0
profile picture
RAEL
Posts: 252 - Karma: 23
Leave the gang signs for the pros, this song has been used, GANG! an edit from Clown School. Dont reuse songs be creative.
Jan 12 2011 8:28PM
0 0
profile picture
D1X
Posts: 402 - Karma: 16
Well if it wasn't supposed to be funny then tell your friends to fuck off and shove their gang signs up each others assholes. An edit under a minute doesn't need an intro longer than 5-10 seconds
Jan 12 2011 8:28PM
0 0
profile picture
skier_boy26
Posts: 11295 - Karma: 502
Contrary to popular belief, wearing a jersey does not make a good skier.

Too much unnecessary filler - uninspired filler at that.

One rail, mix it up, likewise with the tricks.

Otherwise it looked nice, but... that's only a small part of it.


Jan 12 2011 8:29PM
0 0
profile picture
Sklar
Posts: 8864 - Karma: 31,612
then dont
Jan 12 2011 8:30PM
0 0
profile picture
Sklar
Posts: 8864 - Karma: 31,612
shut up, maybe if you would clog up the wrong forum you wouldn't get shit on, ever think of that one?
Jan 12 2011 8:31PM
0 0
profile picture
Blurst
Posts: 13577 - Karma: 10,169
1. Shitty intro
2. Even shittier song
3. Even even shittier afterbang
4. Come on
5. Decent editing.

You have been critiques and please dont get mad at me for having an opinion.
Jan 12 2011 8:31PM
0 0
profile picture
SlimDunkin.
Posts: 2065 - Karma: 361
Hah we'll thanks for the feedback, but none of those are me, and it's all recycled footage I was looking more for feed back on the editing, and I'm well aware it was used in GANG! but like I said I was kind of just expierimenting
Jan 12 2011 8:39PM
0 0
profile picture
Skittle.
Posts: 2537 - Karma: 718
basically covered it
Jan 12 2011 8:40PM
0 0
profile picture
SlimDunkin.
Posts: 2065 - Karma: 361
How is that even relavant? So there was a hand gesture, I was really on looking for feedback on the editing, but thanks, try not to make yourself look like a pissy incompetent 12 year old next time, asshole.
Jan 12 2011 8:44PM
0 0
All times are Eastern (-5)