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Critique My Edit.

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thisandthatfilms
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M&A i dont feel gets enough attention so ill just put it in here..


filmed over two days entirely on a gopro in r3.

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Jan 6 2011 2:44PM
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thisandthatfilms
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rate and comment
Jan 6 2011 2:44PM
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cultrara
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great edit. should be in m&a though.  i liked the song and the 2nd use of slowmo was sick but not the 1st use.
Jan 6 2011 2:52PM
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arneson
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That was a sick edit dawg. Nice song good skiing. Too bad most gopro edits arent like this
Jan 6 2011 2:58PM
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thisandthatfilms
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there was slo mo throughout?
Jan 6 2011 3:06PM
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RiddleMeThis
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pretty dope. i like more sunny shots but i know thats not really your choice. but nice
Jan 6 2011 3:11PM
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thisandthatfilms
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yeah the cloudy shots were from one day and the sunnys were the other. they look sooo much better
Jan 6 2011 3:13PM
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cultrara
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yeah what i ment was the 2nd use was awesome, the rest were a good touch and the 1st use i did not like
Jan 6 2011 3:54PM
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Cudder.
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i seen'd sol-jah-boi
Jan 6 2011 4:01PM
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SCOO-WOOP
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I liked the lu kang grab.

Edit was sick. Good job!
Jan 6 2011 4:37PM
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Free_Haven
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sick edit! i like the slow mo as well. Also what software do you use?
Jan 6 2011 4:50PM
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thisandthatfilms
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oops

sony vegas 7

Jan 6 2011 6:33PM
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alvy.
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the slow mo was really clean. i liked it. and you guys are slaying out there. good job
Jan 6 2011 7:31PM
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Jaggy_Snake
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The song fitted really well, the slo-mo wasn't over used and was very well done.

Very good job, I really enjoyed watching that.
Jan 6 2011 7:36PM
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thisandthatfilms
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thanks for all the comments hommies. anything you guys didnt like?
Jan 6 2011 7:50PM
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Sklar
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you wont get much real critiques in nsg, keep it to m&a if you want real feedback about filming and editing
Jan 6 2011 7:53PM
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skithesprings
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i dislike you as a person, but thats irrelevant.

the edit was pretty damn good. i personally would not have used the slowmo the first time you did, but the rest of the rate changes were tastefully used. a couple of the shots had a little bit of the typical gopro shake but i have yet to find a great solution to that problem. (if you find one let me know haha) the only other thing was the flat light on one of the days which as far as i'm concerned doesn't really matter but some of the media/arts snobs would bitch at that.

great song choice by the way. its a nice change of pace for park edits.
Jan 6 2011 8:05PM
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meth_time
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I liked it.
Jan 6 2011 8:06PM
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bob_ham
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awesome. it may sound gay but that was really inspiring for me to go learn cork 5s. sick
Jan 6 2011 8:07PM
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theWIZARD
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Yeah Okemo! Awesome that mountain, sick edit!
Jan 6 2011 9:01PM
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