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Senior Project - Avalanche Safety Website

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ride-rider
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Yo for my senior project I am producing a Avalanche/snow safety website.  If you guys could check it out, ill get more views.  The more views I get the better my site will look when I present it! 

Its still a work in progress, so let me know if there is anything I should change.  Typos are all over the place at this point.

Here is the link, and for some reason I can't hyperlink it.  The tool is fucked up right now. 
http://backcountryandsnowsafety.weebly.com/index.html

Dec 22 2010 8:38PM
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skiierman
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yo, i think they already have a couple of those sites, dogg.
Dec 22 2010 8:49PM
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leeum.
Posts: 352 - Karma: 61
ourse so you can be tought the proper skills and knowledge before you put yourself in harms way.
Dec 22 2010 9:09PM
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leeum.
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Loose snow avalanches can also occur when soo much new snow has follen, that gravity simply causes it to slide.

Dec 22 2010 9:18PM
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PJS.
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yo dawg
Dec 22 2010 9:20PM
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skiierman
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oh god, is that what his site really says?

you better change your project because you're going to get people killed.
Dec 22 2010 9:31PM
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ride-rider
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Yo heres the page where that was taken from thats not all I had on loose snow avalanches skiierman.  Thanks bro, haha sometimes the words with the most simple spelling are the ones that I fuck up.  Like fallen.

http://backcountryandsnowsafety.weebly.com/types-of-avalanches.html
Dec 22 2010 10:09PM
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skiierman
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your grammar still sucks. gud luk gitin a A, you idiot.
Dec 22 2010 10:13PM
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ride-rider
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Yo thanks asshole!
Dec 22 2010 10:15PM
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ride-rider
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More help is appreciated guys.     Unlike skiierman, who finds it necessary to be a complete useless bitch.
Dec 22 2010 10:20PM
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skiierman
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how about you start every sentence on your site with, YO. it makes you seem so legit.
Dec 22 2010 10:24PM
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ride-rider
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Yo, already do.
Dec 22 2010 10:25PM
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PeterWojnar
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If you expect anyone at all to take you seriously, brush up on your English. If I read a bit of avvy advice that sounds like it was written by an eighth grader, I won't take it seriously.

You will not get a passing grade for creating a website that nobody can take seriously. This project is likely an attempt to simulate the real world; you get credit for success, not for trying.
Dec 22 2010 11:04PM
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bangarangmules
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Link doesn't work anymore. Is this high school senior or college?
Dec 22 2010 11:09PM
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ride-rider
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See, I can actually respect what you said.  You told me what to work on, bluntly but you weren't a complete asshole about it like skiierman.  Thanks man!  The website has been taken off the internet for the time being and I will go through and proof read everything, corrections will be made accordingly. 

Just so everyone does know that I am not a completely illiterate fail of a high schooler, this was honestly the rough draft of my site.  It was only recently roughed out saying Its due in June.. 

This thread is now dead.
Dec 22 2010 11:12PM
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ride-rider
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high school. 
Dec 22 2010 11:12PM
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skiierman
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see its hard to take someone seriously when they send you hate messages then blocks you immediately after. :(
Dec 22 2010 11:18PM
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PeterWojnar
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Please make sure you check that ALL of the information is factually accurate and that there are no missing tidbits. If I'm looking through an avvy site and see something that I know to be wrong, or don't see something that should be there, I'll be questioning the validity of the site.
Dec 22 2010 11:35PM
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