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First year in park edit

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[J_Gasper]
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Hey, I had problems uploading the video on to ns. So here is the link to my first ski edit. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jp_LgoPZoqw. Please dont hate and please give constructive criticism. Also anyone know any good editing systems for hp pavillion. I did this on movie maker.
Thanks ++++K for help
Dec 22 2010 5:28PM
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matt.s
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Dec 22 2010 6:11PM
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Turner.
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not bad at all for a first edit, I've definitely seen worse.
in the description you said there weren't many features, but it got boring watching the same tricks on the same rail and butter box all the time. there was a good variety of angles to your shots though so that was a plus.
Dec 22 2010 6:13PM
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matt.s
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i think it is great, but the song is overused.

a couple tips i have are to keep working on stomping the tricks, looks like you are really progressing
and also, style is defined by what flows the best and feels natural. you dont have to ski exactly like the pros for it to look stylish and good. (not to imply that you are)
Dec 22 2010 6:15PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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Good stuff.
Dec 22 2010 6:19PM
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eheath
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Don't put shots in where you can see whats going on, use a different song.
Dec 22 2010 6:20PM
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[J_Gasper]
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thanks for the help everyone. I know the song is over used its just that was the first thing that came to mind on a quick edit. Movie maker kinda sucks, any suggestions on good systems for hp? keep the tips coming on the skiing please
Dec 22 2010 7:11PM
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A.Eberhard
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Adobe premiere
Dec 22 2010 7:14PM
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[J_Gasper]
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which adobe premiere?

Dec 22 2010 7:26PM
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andrew95
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for a first edit i think it was really good
i really liked how you got so many angles keep up the good work!
Dec 22 2010 9:06PM
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Emma_Watson
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pretty nice quality for first edit..

and pause at 1:44 LOLOLOLOL. but really..
Dec 22 2010 9:45PM
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andrew95
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hahahahahahhahahahahah
Dec 22 2010 9:57PM
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Delvyn_Deep
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I like that, the slopes ur skiing on look so gentle, what size skis do you both ride on?
Dec 23 2010 8:23AM
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[J_Gasper]
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im in the black and i ride on rossi squindo 154 and he rides on rossi 148 i think
Dec 23 2010 9:21AM
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JRyder
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good beginner editing software for windows would be sony vegas pro or pinnacle studio 14 ( really easy to use)
Dec 23 2010 11:48AM
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[J_Gasper]
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thanks
Dec 23 2010 1:56PM
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Where-am-I
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maybe don't put so many shots of the same trick, also what mountain is that? the terrain looks unusual to me for some reason, you also might consider getting some shorter poles if you plan on doing more park. also i like to say also a lot
Dec 25 2010 12:42AM
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[J_Gasper]
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its crystal mountain michigan and yes the park sucks
Dec 25 2010 8:45AM
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