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First Half on my Edit Critique

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SkierPT
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Before I get slayed for posting this here, I just wanted some quick opinions before I put it in M&A. This is really my first attempt at a go pro edit...this is only half of it because we need some more footage. Opinions or idea changes would help.

Heres the HD url

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qmwSDGfLea4&hd=1

Thanks.
Dec 22 2010 12:53PM
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JSiegel
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THAT WAS RAD BRO!
Dec 22 2010 12:56PM
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Trace.
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Not to bad I actually liked, good song choice.
Dec 22 2010 12:58PM
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SkierPT
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Thanks! First positive comments I've gotten for an edit in a while lol
Dec 22 2010 12:59PM
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Peach.
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The skiing and song choice was good.
The trying to be artsy waving at the camera/trying to be thug ruined it for me. Trust me in two years you will hate yourself for it.
Dec 22 2010 1:01PM
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Yung_Gnarley
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Good skiing/riding.

But stationary shots suck. Always.

Remember that.
Dec 22 2010 1:07PM
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TheDude
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pretty good. i would say get some more creative angles, mix things up, try the end of the box, really high looking down, you know something to set this apart from everyone else.

the song made me want to kill myself, but it worked. seeing as this is a 1/2 edit make, im assuming that the other half will have a diffrent song. new song= new genre for sure, rap or something, but definetly no more ravey techno.

solid work, i give it a 7 (USC would be a 10) so with a little work you could definetly have a solid edit.

Dec 22 2010 2:21PM
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SkierPT
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Wow a 7? Thats great thanks bro lol
Dec 22 2010 4:51PM
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