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Critque a Music Video?

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teleTay
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a project for a tv/film 1 class.

not done yet a few tweaks still to be made

*dont judge the song but instead the music video

if you cant watch it because you think it sucks at least skip to 3:00 because out of random luck i got a sick shot with birds!
Dec 3 2010 10:02PM
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Bukkakeskitrip
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sometimes the lyrics didnt match up with what you were mouthing, and there was a transition mid verse that went for far too long (couldnt see the rapper). it would have been fine if it had transitioned onto something else but if you go from one shot of you to another, make it a bit faster. and the bird shot was cool

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Dec 3 2010 10:10PM
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teleTay
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part of the time im now figuring out that they didnt know all the words, so i did my best
Dec 4 2010 2:42AM
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Bukkakeskitrip
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i still enjoyed it, dont get me wrong. it can always be better though
Dec 4 2010 2:54AM
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teleTay
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oh of course, no editing job is really ever finished there are always little things that you can do
Dec 4 2010 8:07AM
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