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First Drop Shoot Critique

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nutsnbolts
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Hey gang, my buddy mark loper (www.markloper.com) took some photos of me the other night in the yard. Check em and let me know what you think!

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thanks!
Nov 24 2010 1:00PM
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bob_ham
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weird cause your not skiing. but looks great!
Nov 24 2010 1:08PM
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nutsnbolts
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haha yeah, i came to CT for thanksgiving and to get my stuff that got shipped to my parents house...no snow here so we had to work with what we could...
Nov 24 2010 1:10PM
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.jr
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Well its not your work, so Im not going to waste much time critiquing them. Most of this is better than the stuff that gets posted on here though..
1. Doesn't work for me simply because the stark contrast from the black to blue is all most these shots have going for them.
2. Would be way better if it didn't have as much dead space.
3.&4. Meh.
5. Can someone please do me a favor and tell me what this lighting set up is called? I know its extremely common and one photographer is really well known for it, and I can't think of the name. I think the lights need to be pushed in and it needs to be shot tighter. Might help that flare. Im at least content he didnt opt for the 'edgy' post processing that typically accompanies that lighting set up..
Nov 24 2010 1:13PM
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nutsnbolts
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bump
Nov 24 2010 3:04PM
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nutsnbolts
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Nov 25 2010 11:23AM
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Lauproz
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i love itClick for larger image
Nov 25 2010 8:21PM
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LjayCinema
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I like the dead space in the 2nd one, IF you plan on doing something in post advertising/logo wise with the space. otherwise the space is overwhelming.
Nov 25 2010 10:36PM
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nutsnbolts
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i plan on it...sent the pics to D Lesh per his request...gonna see what he wants to do
Nov 25 2010 10:43PM
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Shlogan
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second to last i found pretty cheesy, but i know nothing about photography so thats all i can really contribute.
Nov 25 2010 11:02PM
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nutsnbolts
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Magic...

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Nov 25 2010 11:16PM
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.Max.
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Cool logo, but at first look it looks like it reads "One Shit"
Nov 26 2010 9:29AM
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Dustin.
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I just took a fat first drop.
Nov 27 2010 12:07PM
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purps
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were you in...glastonbury ct?
Nov 27 2010 1:31PM
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nutsnbolts
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yessir
Nov 27 2010 7:48PM
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purps
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ill. thats where im from! and mark is a friend of a friend sorta
Nov 27 2010 9:29PM
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nutsnbolts
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+k for gburbs...add me
Nov 27 2010 9:38PM
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miroz
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What up Glastonbury! Mark's my boy, I'm Milos!
Nov 28 2010 10:09PM
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Coalescent
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For the second one, I think a pretty cool concept would be to have a bunch of little first drop logos falling from the sky like snow. May look better in my head then it would look on the photo though.
Nov 28 2010 10:25PM
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Blurst
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You guys look so fucking stupid.
Nov 28 2010 10:28PM
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