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Shredability
Posts: 2756 - Karma: 501
feedback would be awesome and will obvs result in +k

http://phreshmedia.ca/

Its scripted all in HTML so I can't really do anything fancy with it
Nov 11 2010 5:32PM
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nutsnbolts
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Not bad...the opening page is sweet. I would say clean up the gnarly lines on the lettering first...
Nov 11 2010 5:35PM
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benk
Posts: 1342 - Karma: 988
the black and white contrast is very harsh. it looks like something from the 90's. try adding some more neutral tones in there to balance it out
Nov 11 2010 6:29PM
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Shredability
Posts: 2756 - Karma: 501
Ok thanks, i'll give that a try

What gnarly bits are you referring to?
Nov 11 2010 11:56PM
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nutsnbolts
Posts: 1110 - Karma: 16
after you click on enter, look at the white lettering...see how its not straight lines but jagged edges...clean those up for sure
Nov 11 2010 11:58PM
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Shredability
Posts: 2756 - Karma: 501
k thanks
Nov 12 2010 12:15AM
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KarmaInitiative
Posts: 2028 - Karma: 174
No offense, but the code is awful. Look into a developing program like dreamweaver to help with your site

Also play around with CSS. At a minimum I would use a sans-serif font for text
Nov 12 2010 8:48AM
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zakaroo
Posts: 751 - Karma: 37
It's a little plain. If you want to have a better blog, you could just make a blogspot, but I can understand if you want a whole website to yourself.
Nov 12 2010 11:30AM
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Shredability
Posts: 2756 - Karma: 501
I'm thinking about scrapping the blog and just putting a into type page.
Nov 12 2010 2:56PM
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